"The darkness that gleams, and silence that screams." Just a poem I wrote. Would really love to hear what you guys think (:
Let's play a game where I win for once. Short little poem. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
Why did you leave me? I need you. Can I come too? Angsty crap. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
Poem. For a story I'm writing on fanfiction.net :) had to add an MCR lyric, of course.
Just something i wrote in a few miinutes while listening to OFWGKTA. Please read and comment on it, I need some feedback.
"Honesty gets you nothing." Lyrics. Feedback hugely appreciated. EDITED. :)
Something that I found from my head. Would be very happy if you told what you think (:
"Don’t underestimate the ones crying in pain." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
'All i ask is "why me"
"Individuality is not a sin." Lyrics. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
Co-lab between KelseyChem and ImJustFine. Curious?
"I sure as hell don’t want to survive; I just want to feel alive." Feedback greatly appreciated. :)
"You were looking too hard to see." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
"I’m already in this nightmare." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
"Fifteen separate body parts, all perfectly preserved." Quite a creepy poem, feedback would be very much appreciated, even if it's to tell me I'm a maniac.