"Can I teach you a lesson in death?" Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
"It twirls over the pebbles, caressing them with it's shine." A poem about the sea. Written because its currently my next door neighbour. Feedback? I would love some.
Don't become what you set out to destroy...
Inspired by Moonlight Sonata, the only piece of classical music I actually enjoy. :)
If you want to blame someone, try looking in the mirror. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
Another attempt at poetry. It's about war. There is mention of violence. Just saying.
"The darkness that gleams, and silence that screams." Just a poem I wrote. Would really love to hear what you guys think (:
Let's play a game where I win for once. Short little poem. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
Why did you leave me? I need you. Can I come too? Angsty crap. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
Poem. For a story I'm writing on fanfiction.net :) had to add an MCR lyric, of course.
Just something i wrote in a few miinutes while listening to OFWGKTA. Please read and comment on it, I need some feedback.
"Honesty gets you nothing." Lyrics. Feedback hugely appreciated. EDITED. :)
Something that I found from my head. Would be very happy if you told what you think (:
"Don’t underestimate the ones crying in pain." Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
'All i ask is "why me"