|Ithilwen||That might be because the summary makes it look like it's borderline racist. You only provide military details, so perhaps readers think it's a military 'fic with no characters or personal sides. You might get more readers if you redo it.|
|Ronantron||I just signed up, I read some of your stuff Centurion, it was pretty good.Could have been better in places, but overall, way above average.|
|johmichaels||I've got a piece of Original fic-Five Minute Soap. Eh, it's very regularly updated, and, well, I like it.|
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