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RavenNight	Hey everybody! I'm new! Hey, I'm Raven Night {my pen name} Could somebody read my Inuyasha fanfic "Love and Loss" and tell me what they think? Posted at 2006-10-26 09:27:17
JoeFenton	Well, the first thing you need to do is reformat the chapters to be readable. One solid block of text is almost impossible for most people to follow. Posted at 2006-10-26 22:56:34
RavenNight	um...about that...X_X I don't know how... Posted at 2006-10-30 08:38:58
LoveSnape	How did you upload ur story? That mite be the problem... Posted at 2006-11-01 17:52:17
RavenNight	No...I mean...I never learned how to do paragraghs and such...I guess I didn't really pay attention. Posted at 2006-11-02 08:47:26
LoveSnape	oh! well, i'd volunteer to beta-read for you but i don't know anything about Inuyasha. Sorry... But ya, i'd suggest getting a beta-reader to help you out with that! Posted at 2006-11-02 10:12:26

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Empty Face.
by CosmicZombie (PG)
Inspired by Gerard Way's quote 'All your quirks, all your problems- even your depressions and your f...

In: My Chemical Romance