I'm bad. I admit it. I've read and thoroughly enjoyed it without commenting as I should.
Your story is excellent. I love how combative Ed is toward everyone and everything. Feisty.
I should of commented earlier, I'm sorry. I would like you to continue this story at some point. I enjoyed the flow of it and I'm wondering what's happening with Winfry. Poor girl. A mechanic stuck in a magic world. Well she is use to alchemy so it shouldn't be too hard for her to fit in.
Really continue if you can.