Review for No More Metaphors
No More Metaphors
(#) jessa 2007-06-18 05:11:46 PM
I like your stories, but for some reason throughout every piece you've written, you make convey 'smirking' like it's an audible thing. Like it's the same thing as laughing or something. You can't smirk over the phone with the person on the other end being able to hear you. Besides that, 'sall good.
Author's response
Thank you for liking my stories. I have to tell you that "smirking" is audiable. It's not quite a laugh and not a giggle either. More like a sarcastic, short laugh. Much like the one I made when I read this. But everyone is entitled to thier own opinions.
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