Review for you can keep my brother
Some people chuckled and whispered.
"That's OK my grandma didn't like my language either",) oooohhh that was good! Totally sounded like something that was actually said. I mean sometimes dialog is too perfect. Im sure he wouldve had a whole speech planned out in his head and then fucking curses by mistake... Really really good... it sounded like he was actually making it up as he went along and not pre-planned dialog on your part. =)
And then at the end, all skys 'realizations'... come off very well. Not to preachy. totally relatable. Espec. the one about thinking you can fly and then falling on your ass.. I loved that line; Still no where near the Im his gay lover though. That still cracks me up!
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