Review for Out of Place and Under Dressed

Out of Place and Under Dressed

(#) rainbowsprinkles08 2007-07-07 09:41:22 PM

awww!!!! i love how the mood shanges at the end. Like when rayn pounces on him it totally just i dunno, speeds up the story. Good job as always. update soon! AND NO MORE SHORT CHAPTERS lols.

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thank you! haha, and i will try!

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