Review for A Beautiful Lie

A Beautiful Lie

(#) xxbelievemexx 2007-07-13

Obviously you don't know what making out is. It's full of tongues, groping and moans. I don't think Jared would be all.. "How cute." If it was his daughter. And some pointers, maybe describe more, and use puncuation and proper grammer and spelling skills. You have a great story going, and it has alot of potential.