You write each character so well it is terrifyingly wonderful. I laughed outloud at Patrick's inner thoughts. He is quite a humorous man...he should talk more. And the best line was the fact that Patrick was dating Satan's mother. I usually refer to the kids I work with as Satan, so I felt it very fitting!
Smooches to a wonderful writer!!!
Points too!!
Author's response
CeCe? Is that you? I'd love to see an update on your end, love....nooooo pressure, though.