Review for Breakdown

Breakdown

(#) eowynjedi 2006-07-12 03:51:04 PM

Bittersweet, but good. The sequence of events that starts with Tidus wanting to 'rescue' Yuna from the Gunners' Gauntlet progresses very believably, and the last scene when they're in bed together is excellent--I like the way you used the "it all began..." line in a more negative way.

It's definitely an interesting take on how the changes in Yuna would affect the relationship.

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