Review for Epilogue Minus 19
(#) silverleafhp 2007-09-29 01:32:12 PM
In your version you did nothing to clear anything up, other than showing what might of happened to get Malfoy off.
Overall, a poor effort.
A new story or plot aside, what were you expecting to see?
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