Review for Harry Potter and the Army of Ages

Harry Potter and the Army of Ages

(#) Cateagle 2007-10-04

Now that was a most interesting chapter. I like your characterization of Tracey and I think she's going to be very good for Harry. The will reading was a delight (I do wonder if Dumbles tried to barge in and was ejected) and it's interesting to note who had the strongest objections to not completely knowing what was going on with Harry (it makes you wonder if they're telling someone). I thought the final scene, when Tracey and Harry meet was quite nicely done and her reaction was quite in keeping. It will be interesting to see if Harry can convince her that he's more than "Gryffindor Golden Boy" conveys, or at least that there's more to that than she knows.

Great story and I'm most eagerly awaiting the next chapter.