Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) _cranium_ 2007-10-05 03:16:57 PM

hopeanne didn't leave much for me to say haha. (thanks really, i agree with you but if i would've tried to type all that, it would probably make no sense at all) what i like very much about your story (and this chapter.,) is those conversations between skyler and gerard where they think they are taling about the same thing but actually have no idea what they other one is talking about but they still keep talking until they're both confused and frustrated. like the baby/fever scene in an older chapter. and the tag thing in this one. it's quite realistic cause as we all know, we can't read people's minds. it happens a lot.

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i can't tell you how many times it happened to me!
and i thought your review was really helpful too, i mean i want to know what people enjoy reading and what doesn't work for me, so for you just to point out exactly what you thought was realistic enough and what works was beyond helpful...oh and if you enjoyed the confused conversations you're gonna love my new chap!

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