I have read almost all of your works (when are you going to put HP and the virgins up, is it any different not on Fanfiction Alley?), this is by far my least favorite of your stories. The complete deseption on Dumbledore's end is unbelieveable and several other characters seem OOC.
Please write some more, feel free to completely disregard DH or any others. Please put up HP and the virgins here. You are a great wonderful writer.