Review for Live Dangerously

Live Dangerously

(#) Ithilwen 2006-07-16 12:07:54 PM

Ah, Reeve. The good guy/bad guy with his eye on the people's welfare.

Heh. It took a bit of ehhuh? but now that I get it, I like the way you turned the summons into curses.

"withstand shots from anything short of a cannon."

You know what might have been cool? We see the fight that takes place on these elevators. It might have been nice to get a reference to a Big Shot or a Sled Fang or any of the weapons that Aeris and the others used on the way down.

The ending is very strong. Fantastic.

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