Review for Live Dangerously
Heh. It took a bit of ehhuh? but now that I get it, I like the way you turned the summons into curses.
"withstand shots from anything short of a cannon."
You know what might have been cool? We see the fight that takes place on these elevators. It might have been nice to get a reference to a Big Shot or a Sled Fang or any of the weapons that Aeris and the others used on the way down.
The ending is very strong. Fantastic.
(pete/mikey) He leans against Pete's shoulder and says, "We keep making mistakes." Pete kisses him,...
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just kinda winging this one but once I'm done I'll bang out a summary lol
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I wonder if she heard the fear in my voice.