Review for Stay

Stay

(#) herk444 2006-07-19 07:01:27 AM

Lovely first, mate. The dialogue was a bit confusing, and I had to read it over a few times until I figure it out, and the dialogue was a bit miss-placed. But all in all i loved it. More more more!!

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