wow! that was ridiculously well written!! i really liked how much that actually sounded like something pete would write! seriously impressed!! the description was great!! i liked and disliked how you didnt really find out what exactly happened - thats whats cool about one-shots i guess! :)
anyways, i really really liked it!
cheers
kat
Author's response
Thanks a ton, man!
I'm reaally glad you liked it! =)