Review for I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan

I Want to Kiss You on the Mouth and Tell You I'm Your Biggest Fan

(#) i_heart_cliches 2007-12-27

:D I love how you've written this. The minimal dialogue and first person POV really add a lot to the story. You describe things very well and I feel like I know the narrator very well.
The way you write feels really dark and creepy, but I love it. It's awesome! Keep writing :D