Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) _cranium_ 2007-12-28

woah. i'd love to say i saw this coming, that i knew it already back when they got married but nah. i should've known this though, ofcourse you need a fucking marriage lisence to get married! and the witnesses! my god i feel stupid. it's a perfect chapter though, this little confusing and frustrating twist fits the story perfectly. oh and i loved the driving licence thing haha so much fun... i agree with hopeanne, all this mess shows just how immature they are after all. they took a huge step when the got married (or thought they got married) ..maybe everything did happen too fast..
right now, i see trouble everywhere. does gerard know? will he know? will he figure out just how she found out? how's sky gonna take the invalid shit, for all i know she could hunt down that priest and feed him to hungry wild horses. she's not happy about it. when she was gonna divorce her husband she found out they were never married to begin with. damn that's gotta hurt. especially if you happen to be this girl called Skyler. maybe it makes no sense, just like billy said it'll just save her from the paper work but we all know skyler and my guess would be this is gonna tear the girl down. invalid marriage, invalid love (smiling sadly at that one). gees.

Author's response

Too much question I can't answer cause that pretty much kills the entire plot but I loved the ideas you give me...hungry wild horses..That will make one hell of a chapter..