Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) hopeanne 2008-01-02 11:59:17 AM

Okay ummm I so dont know what to say to this chapter...
mmm.
anybody want pie? lol.
No but seriously. Im gonna break this one too.
First off -Billy. I know he comes of rough in this chapter but I still like him. In fact hes even more appealing to me now. I know he was all marching around grumbling at her and shit but I think its sweet. Hes stressed. I think he needs a good - nevermind, you wont write it in, lol.
But um. I can feel Billys frustration with her. Skys and Gees relationship has been rough for a long time and Billy is concerned for her. I can see him getting her upset that shes gonna run back to him, especially since they hadnt settled anything. And I can totally get why Billy is so mad at Gee. I mean Gerard was suppose to be taking care sky as her husband. The whole situation is rough.
As for Frankie. Im sorta surprised that sky didnt ask about Gee but then again Im not surprised. I mean thats the kinda relationship they have. I like the references to the past. It gave it a nice feel.I loved Frankies concern for her. Somethings never change! The boys are always gonna worried about Sky.
And I know that Frankies gonna tell bob whos gonna tell ray whose gonna tell Mikey whos gonna tell Gee.
Ooooh I hope its Gee at the field!! But I dont know. It was a great cliffhanger!!!
As for the whole middle part.
the date was great! I loved the garlic breath part.
mmm rob will review you seperately later. (I know you cant wait)

Author's response

My great cliffhanger patts cliffhanger and you wanted to ruin it! Evil woman!
I don't know if there's anything Billy could do to make you turn on him, besides growing a beard...But he won't so don't pout!

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