Review for Pains of War
Pains of War
(#) Olliegami 2008-01-20 04:20:22 AM
Hey there - It's a shame that this stops here - although I noticed that the last time you updated with in August of 2006, It would be nice to think maybe your FMA muse will spark up again?
A wonderful five chapters - I did notice a few spelling mistakes here and there - but other than that I think you've managed this well - everyone's reactions seem pretty IC to me.
A wonderful five chapters - I did notice a few spelling mistakes here and there - but other than that I think you've managed this well - everyone's reactions seem pretty IC to me.
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