Review for Griffon Reborn
this is good the pace of the story is great... and ur style allows for a true reflection of time, with the activities happening in the wiz world and with harry... congrats for a well thought out structure....
also like that harry wasn't immediately able to learn occulumency and/or take control of teh dementors... this feels for realistic... so well done again.
looking forward to see where you take it from here.
Super-power Harry stories can be fun, but not quite what I'm aiming for here. Keep watching.. I have a few tricks up my sleeve yet.. :)
What could have happened if Harry ate Romilda's chocolate cauldrons that night? And what will Hermio...
In: Harry Potter
- Authors: 633119
- Stories: 40435
In: Battle Royale
In: Angel Sanctuary
Don't worry your sweet little head. It won't ever leave you. One day it will take over. You would gi...
- by change96client1 (PG-13)
"Rain is a hindrance. It gets in the way of your plans. It gets in the way of living. It's just plai...
In: Final Fantasy 7