Review for A Twisted Timeline

A Twisted Timeline

(#) sparky40sw 2008-02-08 09:08:17 PM

top notch chapter - loved the way you used the pensieve and narration to fill in the necessary background without weighing down the story.

So has harry been using his organization to eliminate the horcruxes?? ( I do not remember if this was mentioned in earlier chapters)

hopefully this will not damage the "Harmony" too badly - but if it does, well you do have Luna and Blaise in the bullpen.

thanks for continuing this - it is getting more interesting and gripping - the idiotic mob boss stuff made suspension of disbelief rather difficult.

warm regards
Ken

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