Review for Somebodies

Somebodies

(#) cloneserpents 2008-02-22 03:31:11 PM

That was nice, but Ginny's revelation was a bit too abrupt. I would've liked to have seen a little more emotion from her. But then again, this is a short little piece and you did a good job, so kudos overall

Shawn (a.k.a. cloneserpents)

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