haha! I knew there was something amazing in the lost part of the chapter, I knew it! xD I'm so glad that you've fixed this cause this chapter is beautiful - I think Fic-Wad wanted to sabotage it just for that mere reason!
A first kiss! First kisses are always wonderful, Frerard-first-kisses (hmm everything about Frerard when you're the writer, actually) simply ROCK! But someone saying "I'm sorry" after kissing you wouldn't be very nice, I guess. I think Frankie might get mad or worse uneasy with Gee or something, I don't know...
And Gee managing to make it all go away... That was really sweet and bitter at the same time. Because usually, when we say things like that, we can never do enough to make the other person feel better. But Gee sorta did that, but he left poor Frankie with question marks hanging all over his head, that's mean!! But still, him running out of the room is the more logical (and realistic) scenario, I guess.
I'll be waiting for the rest of the good stuff, r&r buddy! Keep it up :D
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Author's response
Yes, Ficwad is trying to kill one of my fav chapters!! I posted the end of it in a separate chapter, its not much, but its the actual end of the chapter.
Saying I'm sorry isn't nice, nope, but he's confused, poor guy! ;) I'll talk more about that in future chapters... I'll have you all going "Awww poor Gee!!"
Next chapter will be up soon hopefully, unless Ficwad makes another evil plan to destroy it :p
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