Review for Believe in the Kingdom Come
(#) Te Non Sum 2006-07-29 12:54:32 PM
As to the story itself... this was good. Very good. You don't often see really good genfic, and that's exactly what this was. The character voices were great, and the idea that Donald would have magic specifically for cleaning people (in a variety of lovely scents!) is fantastic. I want to be able to do that myself! Also, the way you incorporated elements from FF8 into Leon's backstory was very well done: the GFs, the Garden and the other SeeDs in the picture...
The interaction between Sora and Leon was great, too; you could see the developing relationship (brother-like, I mean, obviously) that you start to kinda see in the game, a bit, but that never really got explored.
Kudos for a job well done and a story well written. :)
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