Review for The Prophesy of The Two
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-03-08 12:02:17 PM
In this story Harry saves the life of the goblin King and becomes a goblin Prince.
I hope the Princess is Hermione.
This story looks great.
I do have an sugjestion; if you introduce and item, please use said item (If Harry gets a house, please use the house in the story in some way). Have Harry use the items or have give them to others os allow others to share them.
I like seaning Harry getting to know other Races as well, it makes a more of a fuller storry.
Please update soon?
as for the suggestion. Anything that I will mention in my stories will be used by Harry and other characters. Whats the use mentioning something if its never brought up again.
as for the Princess you will just have to wait. I have part of second chapter written already, just waiting for more time to write.
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