Oh wow, oh my fucking God. I swear, this is THE most original idea anyone could've come up with for a Frerard!
I love it like...so much. This is definately going on my alerts. Great job.
But just one technical thing, I noted that sometimes you said "He's" instead of "his." You might wanna go back and fix one of those, because it obviously changes the meaning from being the possesive verison of "he" to "he is."
Other than that, fuckin' amazing.
Author's response
Aww, Thanks!
your review means so much to me.
Thanks for pointing that out,
Yeah I always accidently write he's instead of his,
Ill fix it up though.