Review for The Savior of the Damned

The Savior of the Damned

(#) randomreaction 2008-03-29

omg! AMAZING story so far.
soo original!

where to start..
in this chapter, we're all obviously rooting for frank, but i can't help to NOT trust Alyssa. It seems too good to be true. For the her to get out so easily is just suspicious..you would have thought there would have been more measures taken to keep her imprisoned, it seems likely they knew her power, or maybe theu thought she had give up on trying to escape..

i HONESTLY dont know.

but i can just imagine frank finding out that she is PURE EVIL or something, but obviously no-one would believe him, not even gerard.
all i know is that alyssa is making little frankie unhappy...

>=| and she has to go

xD

oj, but update asap please!

Author's response

Thank you! Glad you think so ^^

haha everyone thinks she's a liar. We'll find out in future chapters! xD

Thanks for reviewing!
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