Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) Cateagle 2008-04-07 03:07:54 PM

Ah, minor homonym typo here in Thor's lines, "Thou try my patients Mortals!” should be "Thou try my patience Mortals!” On the other hand, considering his alter ego's profession, perhaps that's not that bad a typo, if typo it is.

I still say I want to see the scene of Steve Rogers confront Dumbles and tell the real story about Grindelwald's death (as discussed some time back in CaerAzkaban).

Just a thought, at the rate this is going, how long before Dumbles "springs" Sirius and tries to use him to get control of Harry? I could see Sirius and Tony managing to get along quite well, though, and that could really make life interesting all around.

Author's response

- The man is a surgeon after all...

- The Cap/Dumbles (re)meeting will be year 4 following the final task...

- Next chapter, thank you very much...

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