Review for Lilin's Note
Lilin's great pleasure in the things she has learned from the humans is very realistic, as is her embarrassment at her mistakes in dealing with humans.
You do an excellent job of portraying a seaperson experiencing culture shock and you do it in neat and quite lovely language.
Gee gets a piercing! No longer a one-shot! Shall be continued! Enjoy, read, rate and review :D
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