Review for Crash and Burn
Crash and Burn
(#) baublehead66 2008-04-21 02:49:10 PM
I think this could be really good story if it grows past what it is right now.
Something big needs to happen; like Frank dying and/or Peyton realizing she's in love with Mikey but Mikey falls for Suicide Alicia (which is where it might be going with him, right?) and Peyton has to win him back.
Or make Peyton less of a blundering, weak girl. Cuz there aren't a lot of strong(er) female characters in fanfiction.
Something big needs to happen; like Frank dying and/or Peyton realizing she's in love with Mikey but Mikey falls for Suicide Alicia (which is where it might be going with him, right?) and Peyton has to win him back.
Or make Peyton less of a blundering, weak girl. Cuz there aren't a lot of strong(er) female characters in fanfiction.
Author's response
I kind of have writers block, so what I've been writing isnt that great. I will be brainstorming more.
Your ideas were great, but like i said im still thinking.
I don't want to ruin any of the story, but I really dont think I'm killing Frank, any time soon atleast
:]
Your ideas were great, but like i said im still thinking.
I don't want to ruin any of the story, but I really dont think I'm killing Frank, any time soon atleast
:]
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