One, this story is pretty good. I love the story line. Though, you do have a lot of misspellings. I don't know if you use word document or whatever, but it sometimes makes it hard to read. But, however, it is an amzing story. I love how you pull on characters outside of Panic at the Disco. Such as Pete Wentz, Ashlee Simpson and bands like Gym Class Heros and Cobra Starship. Keep it up. =]
Author's response
yea sorry about the misspellings lol. i actually don't use word, I just type the text right into the box. I definitely pay more attention too it though =)
* I'll pay more attention to it.