i have a number of things to address in this post so i will be efficent and number them:
1) when is this story getting a title?
2) you are such a major debbie downer! your writing is fantastic so stop being negative. its pissing me off.
3) marcello? where do you even come up with that? hillarious.
4) some of the littlest scenes in this chapter have the greatest impact on the story. like when gerard and frank are talking in the bedroom. emotional.
i think ive run out of topics but i will probaly remember something later that i forget.
keep kicking ass!
p.s. i just want to clarify. im honestly not trying to be mean. i am strong on sarcasm and i hope i didnt offend you.
Author's response
No, no, no, I got thick skin. And I am teh Sarcasm Queen. Keep it coming. Ahem.
1) I can't ever name things until I finish them. When I upload chapters, I have to go back and re-read, searching for title inspirations.
2) My apologies. I just have been feeling (Whether you think this is true or not) that I am not writing as well as usual. But I made a breakthrough tonight. Like I've said, Egan is me in many respects, and she's made a breakthrough. But to get that, you should probably read the next chapter.
3)It's from some movie I think...I just thought it was a great hero name :]
4) Yeah, alot of the time, small stuff does mean a lot. I hope I'm doing well with getting that through.
Keep thinking of topics, I'll keep thinking of answers. Thank you and goodnight.