Review for Oaths of Fantasy

Oaths of Fantasy

(#) melferd 2008-04-24

Very interesting and different, a delightful new take that I look forward to it's unfolding.
I hate to nag, but to condense something is to reduce it. To condescend is to look down upon.

If you bare something, you expose it to others.To bear something is to carry it.

Sorry to niggle at an otherwise fresh and delightful story!