Review for A Whole New Change: Adventures of a Male Veela
A Whole New Change: Adventures of a Male Veela
(#) jabarber69 2008-04-24 03:30:22 PM
Hey I like your story but I got to be honest, I stopped reading it when you got to the point where it stated his wings are always there, he cant retract them at will, which I figure would be a major bummer, I know I wouldnt want them if I couldnt retract them at will.
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