Review for A Whole New Change: Adventures of a Male Veela

A Whole New Change: Adventures of a Male Veela

(#) jabarber69 2008-04-24

Hey I like your story but I got to be honest, I stopped reading it when you got to the point where it stated his wings are always there, he cant retract them at will, which I figure would be a major bummer, I know I wouldnt want them if I couldnt retract them at will.