Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) PerfesserN 2008-04-26 01:24:04 PM

Nice tweaks here, good job creating tension for all the participants. I like how you remind us that Hermione is still in mortal danger without beating us over the collective heads with the fact.
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