FicWad

Guys, log out and try again. The chapter doesn't show to me either when I'm logged in, but i could read it just fine logged out. And again, not, when i logged in again to review. I guess the site has another cold. Good one, Puck. Watch the tempuses, though. I like the prose, but if you try and keep the tempus straight, it'll be much better. The foreshadowing peaked my interest enough to put the story on Watch.

Vanir