Review for As Of Yet, Untitled.

As Of Yet, Untitled.

(#) shysmile 2008-04-27

hahahahahahahah! this was by far the funniest chapter yet! as for favorite lines... would you like me to just rewrite the entire chapter for you?

hmmmm... the conversation with gerard and egan about their nails then ending with the suicide hotline comment was unbelieveably funny, the whole mikey and frank acrobatic show in the hospital room put me in hysterics, and my personal favorite was gerard announcing he was going to marry egan. just throws another complication into their already confusing relationship. thanks for that, now im even more confused.

that chapter was as close to perfect as i think you can get, but i do have one problem.

"stuff happens"?!?!? are you serious? if you are going to be that vague you might as well not put anything at all!

Author's response

Haha, yeah, I don't really believe in summaries. I think they give away what's going to happen in the chapter before it happens. Which sucks.

Egan and Gerard are real smart asses sometimes. It's why I love them. They're very good at duet comedy, in my opinion.

I like your reviews best, I think. You're very insightful, and you say good stuff and ask good questions.