Review for Paralyzed.
Paralyzed.
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-04-28 09:49:30 AM
that was amazing! Wow! Really well written and I loved the way you explained his feelings...the red legos was brilliant!
I just loved it...the emotion behind the words was intense! Great GREAT job!
cheers
kat
I just loved it...the emotion behind the words was intense! Great GREAT job!
cheers
kat
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