I really enjoyed this chapter.
I felt as if I was there watching this conversation unfold.
It felt real.
Which is very hard to come by these days.
I absolutely love your writing style and your vocabulary.
Its much more advanced then most writers on here.
no offense to them.
oh.
and my bet is that there will be little ones and that Gerard will get her to change her mind about marriage. at least I hope
xoxo
Jess
Author's response
Thank you. I have quite a bit of practice making real conversations by myself. There's an almost constant dialogue running through my head, like CNN in the background, and I just pull from that.
Thanks about the vocabulary too. I pride myself on that. Sadly, I still speak like a regular teenager. I say 'dude' way too much.