Review for As Of Yet, Untitled.

As Of Yet, Untitled.

(#) lalalovexjeje 2008-04-30 08:38:44 PM

I really enjoyed this chapter.
I felt as if I was there watching this conversation unfold.
It felt real.
Which is very hard to come by these days.
I absolutely love your writing style and your vocabulary.
Its much more advanced then most writers on here.
no offense to them.
oh.
and my bet is that there will be little ones and that Gerard will get her to change her mind about marriage. at least I hope

xoxo
Jess

Author's response

Thank you. I have quite a bit of practice making real conversations by myself. There's an almost constant dialogue running through my head, like CNN in the background, and I just pull from that.

Thanks about the vocabulary too. I pride myself on that. Sadly, I still speak like a regular teenager. I say 'dude' way too much.

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