glad to see this back. Loved the HarryTonks interaction (Tonks is one of my favorite periphery characters)
Jury is still out on the Justin/Hermione connections; I go back and forth on him.
I loved the Slytherin scene, I am part of the yahoo group you posted the first draft on and got a good laugh from that as well.
Keep going, eagerly anticipating the next draft
- I know a woman much like I write Tonks, she's a slob I've cleaned up after and cooked for many times. And yes after her living in her apartment for three years, I had to show her how to use her oven...
- I figure that both being Muggle born might be a starting point...