Review for A New Chance Continued

A New Chance Continued

(#) dc1 2008-05-21 02:10:27 AM

i didn't read the original story, but this one has lots of promise. i do have one major gripe with it though. if i was 20 years old and went back in time and someone, like an uncle, was abusing me, i would destroy them. for someone like Harry who, has been trained to kill in war, letting Vernon beat him, is ridiculus. when women are in abusinve relationships, at least they say they love the man. in this case Harry doesn't even like his family, let alone love them. there is no excuse to put up with that crap, unless he likes going to a dominatrix or something. i sincerly hope that the next chapter involes some justice if not revenge against vernon and that family.

cheers
dc1

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