Review for A Moment Like This

A Moment Like This

(#) zevie 2008-06-09 05:23:56 PM

Haha, that was cute. I love the total awkwardness of the date, from the beginning to the end. I love the excuses they have at the beginning, and I especially love that she's so uncomfortable being all curled next to him. Great detail. This is a very realistic piece.

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