Review for Second Fiddle

Second Fiddle

(#) Mikaiyawa 2008-06-11 11:28:21 AM

I'm liking the story line, finding a few bobbles in word use (mostly tenses, which I'm dreadful with myself) but the plot works well enough for me to skip over them without to much trouble. I am hoping the Harry and Neville can settle their differences as they are both on the same side. very much looking forward to the next update.

Author's response

Glad you like the story. I guess I trust my word editor too much.

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