Review for The Tragic End
The Tragic End
(#) crystalcrash 2008-06-13 01:32:04 PM
The story and idea are great. In my opinion though, everything happened too fast. Frank is drunk, Gerard suddenly tells him for some reason he loves Frank (why did he choose that moment after all those years?), Frank "thinks" he loves Gerard, and when Gerard is dying he says he loves him deeply. It's kinda strange, don't you think?
I really like the idea though, and the last sentence was sweet =)
I really like the idea though, and the last sentence was sweet =)
Author's response
Yeah I know it all happened quickly. I had a dream about it and I was like OMG I have to write this down.
Thanks for the response.
Thanks for the response.
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