Review for Unknown Memories
(#) morriganscrow 2008-06-15 04:21:40 PM
Ollivander as a mentor is different and interesting. You write their characters well and the dialogue is just fine.
The underlying unrest and dissatisfaction with the status quo, as indicated by the interesting group in Ollivander's shop, indicates much interesting story to come.
Whilst I am enjoying the Katie/Harry romance, it has the feeling of impermanence to it, as if it is a "first relationship", rather than the abortive one Harry had with Cho. Is this the case? In a way I hope so, as the hints of something between Harry and Hermione really appeal to me.
Your subtle intro of bias, even in the well-intentioned Weasleys, was excellent, and I look forward to more on that too, and how Harry, Hermione and the gang deal with it.
Keep up the fine job!
There were a few things in life that made Edward Elric inordinately happy. His brother. Alchemy. Pul...
- Authors: 610052
- Stories: 40308
This will be my first ever fanfiction even though I've been reading them for a couple years now. Thi...
Sequel to ‘Blood and Affection’. After a year has passed since Gerard turned Helena Sheridan int...
A Taylor Swift Fan Fic
Set somewhere in S4. Sam's colds gets in the way of hunting and Dean is terribly hurt. Major display...
If you want to backup your DVD collection in your external hard drive, sc card, USB hard drive or iP...