Review for Punish Me

Punish Me

(#) eveliens 2005-10-26 06:15:29 PM

I think that this story does an excellent job of showing Soubi's thoughts. I'd imagine that in the begining, Ritsuka's reluctance to be a Master hurt and confused him. The flow was very smooth and the italics emphasized the train of thought. Wonderful job.

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