Review for Illusion Island
(#) BlackAngelChick 2008-07-10 06:19:17 PM
I love the storyline, it's very original, but I think the story goes on for a bit too long. Don't get me wrong, I love it, but it's just so long! Oh, and also try substituting full stops with commas. It makes the story seem more professional.
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